Salamat---- kay Lord coz he gave me friends who've helped me to write poetry
Xie Xie---- kay Mr. Harkness
To xia--- kay Kiel
Arigato--- kay Jayson
merci--- kay Aldrich
Muchas Gracias--- kay Pheleen, kay Raymund
Danke---- kay Jonathan
Daendanhi Kamsahamnida---- kay Bettina
October 10, thanks giving day, 0:55 a.m.,
Thanks to my teacher for giving me poetry, coz.. now I know what cooperation is like. Haha.. Thank you to all of you, haha.. Really.. coz.. You really help me on my 5 poem assignments.. I know for some of you it's very easy to write a poem, but for me it's really a struggle haha.. the rate of my poem speed is one poem: one week haha very slow right and i have an assignment of 5 poetry in just 1 week so it's really a strugle for me
now this are the poems that we made.. it's not that perfect.. but i love it coz they helped me finished my five assignment poetry.. i mean they've really take a heavy burden out of my back.. really.. so ,, I thank them 1X10 to the 1,000,000 th power hehe
this is it.. please message me if you found out some errors.. because my teacher said that, "the best way to know how good your poem is to let others read your work"
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Hunger
Alone,
Sitted on a wooden chair,
In the cold plains of Siberia
Cold swift breeze
bearing thousands of flaming needles punctured
through my delicate stomach.
My stomach, perforated with needles
triggers a fire burning coldly
Fire starts spreading through my body
which looses it's blood gradually
My mind starts Picturing
The inviting aroma of Turkey,
perfectly baked,
juices which ooze slowly
from it's barbequed skin
Fluids starts flowing,
under my toungue, beside my teath
As if a lemon is squirted into my mouth
Acids which reacted with fire..
Burns, Burns, Burns like cold blue fire
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that was the poem which pheleen tulong (helped) me. HAhaha kahit ilan araw mo na yan binabasa hindi ka parin nag sasawa.. hehe also thanx to Reymund COZ ..for telling me the translation of Sapanish word for thank you... He is a Spanish translator.
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then
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Captured Freedom
A dove Flies freely
in the placid atmosphere
suddenly captured.
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Maple leaves of Autumn
crimson maple leaves
ruffled by a gust of wind
danced lively in air.
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Thanks to my teacher for teaching me some Haiku's hehe
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On the stage of shame
My body becomes a candle
When I am on stage
All eyes are staring at me
Which ignites a flame inside me
A flame burning red
setting a fire on my face
My body melts slowly
while watery wax drops gradually
Waxes on the floor
preventing you to do my move
How I wish to end the show
before the show melts me so.
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thanx jonathan for making some revisions on my work
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Lonliness
an isolated night in the darkest corner
no one to be with
no one to stand with
Loneliness rushes beneath
Dead air from november came
Swarming through my ear
saying in a solitary voice
"I'll take you to Hade's place "
My heart became a slave of loneliness
was trapped in a caged while pumping hard
Slowly paralyzed by sadness
Can not love until it almost shattered.
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merci for Aldrich for helping me on this poem haha merci :D and thank you also for always praising my work even if it's not that good hehe
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Lastly
Poetry don't be angry on me :D
Poetry, poetry
I love you so
but please oh please
don't be angry at me
because my heart beats faster each time
i read your words.
filled with frustration,
my heart pumps a ton of blood into my head
such that my head becomes a pot
which reaches 100 degrees celcius
cooking all the blood
boiling, and boiling, which
suddenly turns into a volcano
that could go at any second
haha.. thanx jonathan to jonathan or should I say Daendanhi Kamsahamnida.. hehe wierd noh.. anyways I'm really grateful to him coz.. he finished my last poem, and i really don't know what to do with that poem. and actually natawa ako sa poem mo or poem ko.. kasi haha basta ewan ko ba natawa lang ako.. at t.y. din coz u revised my poem.. At first, I tought, that the poem was useless , but you revised it. hehe
Also Special thanx to Kiel and Jayson for giving me tips on poetry haha Jao.. yung internalized and being emotional is learn hehe.. you also need to learn how to write what you feel hehe.. And also thanx Kiel for the brainstorm thing.. nag brainstorm talaga ako sa isip ko lang.. tapos na-internalized ko na yung mga na brainstorm ko.. Also Advance Happy B-day 2 days na lang !!!
And Happy B-day narin kay Steven.. singit ko narin dito hehe..
And Thank you tlaga sa lahat ng tao.. Maraming salamat (ay mali dapat mas deeper meaning filipino na word para ma internalized macyado kaso lang natutulog na si KA-raymund eh hehe.. anyways T.Y. !!! 1x10 to the 1000 th power... also HAPPY THNAKS GIVING DAY>> GOD BLESS YOU ALL ( and also me )....till next time
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